Friday, 3 April 2026

Daybreak by Zara Thustra, still water

 

The grey moon hangs low in the night sky, casting a pall across the valley where a sleepy suburban town lies. Down here, in OneTown, terraced houses press shoulder to shoulder along narrow streets, while birch trees shed their gilded leaves on the cold autumn wind.

Every house comes with a tessellated driveway and a privet hedge. Every house comes with a conservatory and a flowerbed. Every house comes with a back garden and a swing.

Husband, Wife, and Daughter live in one such house. In the gloom of the hall, where the grandfather clock ticks away, snapshots of their life hang on their wall of joy. This picture is at the public pool: Husband is belly-flopping to Wife and Daughter’s great delight. Here, they’re making faces at the monkeys in the zoo enclosure. Their favourite is that one over there: they’re huddled together by the newly built snowman in front of the chalet (a freezing day, but worth it, because then they had warm cocoa by the fire).

Upstairs, the family nestles in the arms of Morpheus. The parents’ bedroom lies in a veil of silence. A mosquito’s buzz blares out of the dark and tears the veil asunder. The noise hangs briefly over Husband’s head, unwavering, before trailing away to nothing – only to make another fly-past, sounding like the scraping of a fork across a metal sheet. Husband stirs under the covers. The buzzing tails off once again. Husband switches on his bedside lamp. The light encloses the bed in a warm shell, where it feels safe and comfortable, keeping the rest of the room in semi-darkness.

Weedy, with heavy bags under his eyes and greying hair, Husband belies the fresh-faced man in the family pictures. Only five years have passed, yet now he looks fifteen years older. He studies the green digits on his alarm clock and begins to fidget. Four a.m. already. He must be up for work in exactly two hours, a routine he adheres to, as does everyone else in OneTown, like the followers of a religious order.

His ears pick up a vibration in the air. Right away, Husband spots the fuzzy outline of a mosquito launch off the lampshade and then cling to the wall on his bedside. He can’t allow that nuisance to ruin his seven-hour sleep. Anything to hand to squash it? Let’s see…Yes, the black book.

Husband slips out of bed and pads up to Wife’s dressing table on the other side of the bed.

The black book, a vade mecum of standard civil behaviour, is issued by the Department of Civility of OneTown. Every family owns one, without exception. On the front cover, the following words are embossed in glittering gold:

 

DUTIES OF THE FAMILY: THE HUSBAND, THE WIFE, AND THEIR CHILD

 

Husband has second thoughts about using the black book as a swat. What would Wife think if she saw him? What about the others in town if they learned of it? As long as no one catches him, there’s no harm done.

And so, he lifts the book from its spot next to the scented candle and the lighter, then tiptoes back over to his side of the bed and slinks towards the mosquito. At the wall’s edge, he peeks at Wife – still sleeping – and slams the book down on the mosquito, which drops dead to the floor. Husband scoops it up and clasps it in his fist. Then he places the book back just so, right next to the scented candle.

Talk about stress.

Catching his reflection in the mirror, Husband’s face blanches: Lucius, naked, grins back at him. Two sides of the same coin. Unlike Husband, however, Lucius hasn’t lost an ounce of his silver lustre.

“How many more years did you believe you could ignore me?” Lucius demands. “This time, there’s no getting r

“No, no, no. Not again,” Husband says. Eyes closed, he grips the edge of the table. “Get away.”

He chances another look at the mirror: his own reflection. What a relief.

Quick, back to bed. This done, he hides the dead mosquito under his pillow. Good, everything is back to normal. He turns the light off and soon falls asleep.

 

* * *

 

The dripping of water, as in a cave, echoes in Husband’s ears. He pulls himself up and out of sleep, arriving not in his bedroom, but in infinite black space.

Husband feels his way in the dark, his eyes adjusting slowly. In the distance, he picks out the weak light of a lamppost. Under it, something angular juts out from the ground. As he approaches, alert for the slightest sound, the object resolves.

A headstone.

Husband peers at the inscription.

 

LUCIUS

COWARD

 

A naked figure detaches itself from the darkness. Husband’s face twists in horror as Lucius steps into the yellow light.

“Go away,” Husband says and keeps well out of Lucius’s reach. “Let me be.”

Lucius withers Husband with a stare. He creeps towards Husband, forcing him into retreat.

They circle each other.

“Let you be?” Lucius says. “Look at you. You are dying. We are dying. And you are letting it happen without a fight.” His hand shoots out, finger trained at the headstone. “I refuse to let that come to pass. It is time for you to wake up.”

Husband bumps against the lamppost behind him and comes to a standstill. “What’s there to change?” he says. “Things are what they are. That’s the way it is for everyone. Anyway, it could be worse.”

“What could be worse?” Lucius bursts into laughter. “What could possibly be worse than your so-called life?”

The lamppost light flickers off. And back on, now glowing red.

No sign of Lucius.

The loud clump of feet alerts Husband to the presence of danger. And sure enough, five white automata appear out of the shadows. They surround him. A bell tolls somewhere in the darkness.

BONG. BONG. BONG.

The automata press in on Husband through the gauze of red light: fixed smiles on their masks, arms and legs chopping the air like mechanical axes. Over the loud tolling, they parrot stock phrases at Husband, who remains trapped inside the Tenth Circle of Hell.

“The bank has granted us a loan. Are we getting the chalet?”

“Your key performance indicators are down. Give me better results.”

BONG. BONG. BONG.

“You have one more month to complete your tax return.”

“Pleeeeease say yes to Mummy. You’d be the best daddy in the world.”

“Buy our products with 0% interest-free credit.”

BONG. BONG. BONG.

Reeling from the all-out assault, Husband covers his ears to shut out the cacophony, but he makes no effort to fight back and drops to his knees. When the automata finally cluster around him, the bell falls silent, and they melt away.

“What could be worse than being always accountable to someone?” Lucius says from the lamppost. He stands Husband on his feet. “Our future is now. It’s time to burn our bridges.”

“That sounds too hard.”

“My friend, it’s easier than you think.” A smile brightens Lucius’s face. “Then the most wonderful thing will happen. We’ll be accountable only to our self. Come on, what do you say?”

“I’m sorry, I can’t.” Husband looks down, avoiding Lucius’s eyes.

Lucius pushes him away. He rejoins the shadows. Then his voice permeates Husband’s thoughts. ‘“I can’t”? Well see about that.”

The red light blinks off.

 

* * *


x

A mosquito’s buzz breaks the silence.

Husband wakes up in the pitch-black bedroom. The grating noise thrums overhead, taunting Husband, and fades away.

“Oh, what am I going to do?” Husband berates himself. “Is there more than one mosquito? Please, no.”

He hits the light switch and lifts his pillow. The dead mosquito isn’t there. He rakes over his corner of the mattress to no avail. From the corner of his eye, he glimpses the framed picture on Wife’s bedside table: two newlyweds locked in a tight embrace. Lucius’s words haunt him.

Our future is now. It’s time to burn our bridges.

The mosquito sweeps across Husband’s field of vision, then zigzags into the shadows.

Why not sleep in the sofa? Yes. No. Otherwise, how would he explain that in the morning? He should switch on the ceiling light, then. He can’t risk waking Wife and getting caught red-handed. Argh, there’s no way around it: somehow that damn mozzie must be found.

Husband bolts out of bed and fetches the black book from the dressing table. Then he combs his bedside wall for the mosquito, though the further he sweeps along it, the fainter the light from the bedside lamp.

To his right, Wife wakes up. She clears her throat. “Honey?”

No answer.

“Darling? Are you alright?”

Jesus Christ. Can’t he be left alone for one fucking minute, without having to explain himself? In semi-darkness, reaching the bedroom corner, Husband moves leftwards on to the sidewall. His eyes straining, they roam the wall. Up and down, up and down, up—

“I’m talking to you,” Wife says from the bed behind Husband. “What on earth are you doing?”

“I’m so sorry, darling.” Husband tears himself away from the wall. “I didn’t mean to wake you.” He crouches down at his bedside. “Could you please try to go back to sleep? I promise you, I’ll follow suit shortly.”

“Tell me first what you’re doing. Surely, it can wait until tomorrow, can’t it?”

Husband hangs his head. He’s never going to find that bloody insect.

The bedroom door eases open. Now what?

Rubbing her eyes, Daughter steps into the room. Wife jumps to her feet, moving to the door, and flicks the ceiling light on.

“It’s okay,” Wife says to Daughter, and hugs her close. “Your daddy can’t sleep either. He is not feeling himself.”

The mosquito whines past Husband’s head. This time Husband has a clear view: it whizzes across the empty bed to attach itself to his bedside lamp.

“Daddy,” Daughter whispers, “maybe if I give you a magic hug, you will feel better?”

Husband ignores her as the mosquito buzzes off the wall. He stomps across the bed, tossing the black book aside, his eyes locked on the flying beast. It’s now or never

“Are you out of your mind?” Wife says.

This intrusion knocks Husband off balance; he stumbles off the bed.

The mosquito zigs over his head and zooms out of sight.

Fuck. Calm down, you are going to find it. Then things will be as they should be, and he won’t have the last laugh.

“Daddy?” Daughter takes a step forwards. “Why aren’t you answering Mummy?”

Wife joins her. “Darling, can we act like normal people and go back to sleep now?”

With nowhere to go, Husband backs into the corner of the bedroom. Images flash across his mind: the lamppost in infinite black space; the five masked figures move in on him; he drops to his knees…

The tame lion snaps back to reality.

“No.”

This simple two-letter word roars around the bedroom.

Husband draws level with Wife and Daughter at the open bedroom door, a river of tranquillity flowing through his veins. Finally, he speaks again.

“Leave. Me. Alone.”

Wife and Daughter float away like two ghosts through the doorway, disappearing into the shadows beyond.

To his surprise, Husband cracks up, his sides splitting so violently that he strains to breathe. Indeed, it is easier than he thought. He slips off his glistening gold band like a snake shedding its skin.

A renewed Lucius picks up the candle lighter from the dressing table. He snatches the black book from the untidy bed sheets. Without a second thought, he sets the book on fire and hurls it. The burning book lands on the floor with a heavy thud. Lucius watches the flames shrivel the pages until only ashes remain.

He slams out of the bedroom.

 

* * *

 

High in the hills, under the night sky, Lucius looks down at OneTown, a speck of light in the shadowy valley. His face cracks into a smile.

It is done.

He turns his back on OneTown for good, and, naked, begins to scramble up a slope through a wood of oak trees. Above the canopy, the night sky darkens to indigo. Lucius reaches the hilltop.

Far ahead of him, the sun rises over a road running through the open countryside. As Lucius climbs down the grassy slope on the other side, birdsong rings out in the summer sky. Soon, the sun reaches its zenith.

At the bottom of the slope, Lucius strikes out along the road towards his new life, shading his eyes against the brightness.

 

The Beginning

 Bio:

Zara Thustra is an English teacher who lives in Cornwall, England. He is happily married and has two beautiful daughters, Amber and Natalia. He hopes to fulfill his childhood dream of having one day a collection of his short stories published. His favourite book is Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland.

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