Thursday, 16 April 2026

Shimmer the hinny by Darrell J Wiens, Café Mocha

 

Jackie startled awake when she felt a breath of warm moist air blow across her face and heard a loud snort near her left ear.  Then she felt something soft but heavy nudge her left shoulder.  But the sensations stopped.  Now another snort a little farther away.  What the heck?  She opened her eyes.  Dark all around.  Where am I? she wondered as she shrugged out of grogginess into quickening alarm.  Realization:  she was at the Philips County fair in the horse barn––the warm air, the snorts, and the nudge were all from her small hinny Shimmer.  Guess I fell asleep a few hours ago, Shimmer.  What am I going to do now?  I’m wide awake!

She stood from the pile of straw and touched her phone.  Twenty past midnight.  She reached over and rubbed Shimmer where she liked, up along her mane to between her long ears.  Jackie looked around in the scant light––no sign of anyone, only a few horses now quiet in their stalls.  Shimmer, I’m going out to take a walk and look around, okay? The hinny turned her head to look at her and huffed her permission.

As Jackie emerged from the horse barn she looked up, taking a deep breath.  The air was fresher outside, the sky starry.  The county fair landscape in this town was dimly lit by a thick crescent moon in the Montana night sky.  She struck out cautiously toward the midway, her boots thudding softly on the hardened dirt.  Soon she passed between rows of fair amusements:  guessing game booths, strength and skills games, rifle gallery, a toy shop.  All dark and quiet.  Then she turned toward the carnival area and passed the beckoning venues:  Forbidden Canyon, House of Mirrors, Jurassic Island, and Madam Cortavan’s Cabaret Erotica.  Their garish signs now looked serene but a little frightening in the moonlight.  She came into the carnival area where pathways weaved among the rides, none of which she had been able to take this year.  They seemed to be the same ones she’d ridden in past years, in the same spots too.  She had always liked the Cobra and the Wild Mouse––certainly the scariest––and always the double Ferris Wheel, because she could see most of the whole town from her seat pitching worryingly at the pinnacle.  She secretly wished she had a boyfriend to take in that sight together.  Despite her reverie she felt a little frightened in the pervasive stillness now enveloping the amusements. Everything seemed weirdly surreal.

Jackie stopped short when she heard a soft noise.  It sounded like footsteps though just faint, but when she stopped, the noise stopped.  She took a few more steps and stopped again but heard nothing.  When she reached the Wild Mouse ride a little farther on, she heard the steps again.  She decided to walk on but then turn around quickly to look.  When she did, she caught sight of a movement.  Hard to be sure, but it seemed to be a boy ducking in behind a ticket booth.  ‘Who’s there!’ she shouted.  A slightly sinister echo shadowed her voice.  Cautiously she began to walk toward the booth.  Then a young boy darted out from where he was hiding there.  He ran back toward the Merry-Go-Round.  He ran hard, but Jackie judged him to be young, maybe eight, and she was an athletic country girl fast enough to catch him.  She broke into a run, closed in, and grabbed his collar.  It surprised him enough that he lost his balance and tumbled backward onto a patch of dry grass, breathing hard and kicking.  ‘Let me go you bitch!’

Incensed, Jackie pinned him on his back, then sat astride his chest and held his wrists to the ground.  ‘Just take it easy, kid.  I won’t hurt you if you’ll settle down.’

‘Let me go!  I’ve got a knife and I’ll slice your face into bloody strips!’  She held him to the ground.

‘You might have a pocketknife in your jeans, but I won’t let you up unless you calm down.  Don’t make me hurt you.’  He tried to kick her off with his knees, but that was useless.  Then he spit up into her face.

‘Okay, kid, that’s it!’  She shifted her left knee to his right arm and swept her left hand quickly to grab his left arm with both of hers; then she twisted his forearm back until it hurt just enough...

‘Ow!’ the boy screamed into the night air.  ‘Let me go bitch!’  Jackie’s eyes widened and she twisted harder.  Finally, he relented and went limp.  She eased the pressure.

‘You’ve got a foul mouth for a little twerp––you will apologize right now!’  She resumed the pressure on the arm.

‘Okay, okay...damn it, I’m sorry.  SORRY!’  She let his arm go and stood over him.  He reached toward his pocket, but she quickly pinned his wrist with her boot.  Then she looked down at him sternly and gradually lifted her foot away.  She saw tension leave his body.  His breathing slowed and tears flooded his eyes.  He lay defeated.  After a momentary pause she reached down, took his hand, and pulled him to his feet.  He stood looking down, rubbing his left arm.

‘You must be about eight, right?  What’s your name and what are you doing here in the middle of the night?  My name is Jackie.’

‘Name is Jamie Duke’ he mumbled.  ‘I got lost this afternoon from my big brother.  And if he shows up looking for me, I’ll have him beat the snot out of you!  He’s fourteen.’

‘Well I’m fifteen and I can probably handle him.’

‘I think he just wanted to be with his buddy Amos when we ran into him waiting to get on the Wild Mouse.  I don’t think you could handle two guys.’

‘Maybe not.  He doesn’t sound like a very nice brother going off and leaving you here.  Can’t believe he hasn’t come back looking for you.’  She paused fixing him with her eyes.  Her voice softened.  ‘Have you eaten anything since he left you?’

‘Well, no, I spent all my money on the Wild Mouse...rode it three times.’  He wiped his eyes and looked away.  ‘I love that ride.  I didn’t even want to go home––this is my ultimate dream world!  I’m gonna ride it again as soon as it opens in the morning––I swiped a dozen tickets from that booth.’  Jamie looked up at her, his face now more innocent.  ‘I am damned hungry though.’  He was defiant but calmer.

Jackie’s angry face melted into a look of sympathy.  ‘Listen here, Jamie.  You and me are gonna walk over to the horse barn where I’ve stabled my hinny––that’s an animal a lot like a mule––she’s my 4-H project.  I have a couple of sandwiches and a bag of blue corn chips.  So you’ll have something to eat.  Your pocketknife is gonna get locked in my horse barn locker.  Then maybe we’ll try to get some sleep on the straw.  And tomorrow when the rides start up again we’ll go back to the Wild Mouse, and you will turn in those tickets you’ve stolen.  Then we’re gonna call your brother or your parents... or the police if we have to.  You got all that?’  Jamie nodded reluctantly, thinking about his empty stomach.  Jackie turned and reached out for his hand, but Jamie kept his hands down.  They set out on the path she had come.

‘You from around here?’ Jackie asked in a kinder voice.

‘I’m from Havre, but I have an uncle who lives here.  He lets Jake and me stay with him when we come to the fair every year.  He runs the Cattleman’s Bar and Grill on 1st Street.’

‘Do you have his phone number?’

‘That’s none of your business.’

‘Okay, just askin’.  She paused a moment.  ‘You gonna go to the rodeo they have here tomorrow night?’

‘No... I would, but I don’t have enough money for that stuff.  Guess I’d like to see the bronc riders someday.’

‘I hope you do.  I love it––I kinda root for the horses though.’  She looked up.  ‘Have you ever been in any of these livestock barns?’  She gestured to the row of long barns coming into view.  ‘They’re all free.  You can go into any of them and we’re a friendly bunch, happy to show off our animals.’

‘Kinda stinks around here.’

‘Yeah, but you get used to it.  Here we are, the horse barn.  It’s dark and quiet in here now.  So you just stick with me.’  She reached out her hand again.  He took it nervously.  They walked in slowly.  As they passed the hindside of a large Shire stallion it snorted loudly.  Jamie jumped back, squeezing Jackie’s hand.  ‘It’s all right... he’s just telling us he hears us.  He won’t kick.  They moved on cautiously and came to Jackie’s stall.  Gradually their eyes adjusted to the dim light and Jamie could see the small equine turn its head to look.

‘This is Shimmer.  She’s a hinny––the hybrid you get when you cross a horse stallion and a jenny mare.  If you breed ‘em the other way, you get a mule.  Hinnys are strong, agile, and highly intelligent.  Shimmer’s sire––that is her father––was a flaxen chestnut Connemara stallion.  That’s an Irish pony and he was brown with white feet, mane, and muzzle stripe.  Her mother was a bay donkey; bays are medium-to-light brown.  I named her Shimmer for her coat because it shines in the sunlight.  Hinnies are raised by their donkey mare mothers, so they behave more like a donkey than a horse.  Mule colts are raised by their horse mothers, so they act more like horses.   Shimmer is small, brown with the white markings, and friendly.’  Jackie draped her arm on Shimmer’s shoulders.  ‘She’s the only one here and I thought I’d win a ribbon yesterday in the judging.  But I didn’t.  Could be I didn’t show her well.  I was pretty bummed.  But Shimmer’s just fine...she didn’t care.  Go ahead and rub her between her ears––she loves that.’  She pulled his hand up and placed it.  He couldn’t stop his smile as he scratched, and Shimmer huffed in contentment.

‘She is a friendly one, isn’t she?  Where’s her momma now?’

‘Her momma is Willow and she’s at home on the ranch.  But Shimmer is all grown up now––this is as big as she’ll get.’

‘Ranch?’ Jamie asked as he looked down to the straw and noticed her broad brimmed hat.  ‘Are you a cowgirl then... you have horses and cattle out there?’

‘Yep, Montana cowgirl born and raised, though I’m about an eighth Blackfoot Indian.  An’ we have a herd of Red Angus and nine horses, plus three mules and five donkeys.  My little brother is twelve and him and me, we help take care of all our stock.  I don’t ride broncs, but I can rope and tie a calf pretty good.’

‘Wow, no wonder you took me down and pinned me back there.  Hey, I have a question...  you said a hinny is born from cross breeding a donkey with a horse... how do they... you know, do it... with a big horse and a short little donkey?’

‘Well, you just sit down here on this bed of straw and make yourself comfy.  And give me your pocketknife.  I’m gonna pull out the sandwiches and corn chips so you can get some grub in your belly.  Then we can talk all that over.’

The two sat down on the straw with the food, Shimmer watching as Jamie ate.  They talked into the night, Jamie launching many questions and Jackie providing her best answers.  Eventually he began to yawn and then he leaned back on the straw.  Sleep came quickly.  When he was sound in slumber she brought out a blanket and covered the boy up to his chin.  Then she locked away the pocketknife, found another blanket, and went to sleep on the other side of Shimmer.

 

 

Jackie and Jamie shivered a little standing in the cool Montana morning, first in line at the Wild Mouse ticket booth.  Jamie looked up into the cheerful face of an old man behind the window.  He put his strip of tickets down under the window arc.  ‘I am sorry Mister.  I stole these tickets from your booth last night and I’m giving them back.  I love this ride too much for my own good, and I wanted to ride it as much as possible today.  But I was wrong to take these.  Like I said, I’m sorry.’  He looked the man in the eyes and then averted his gaze to Jackie.  The man looked at him, then at Jackie, then back at Jamie.

            ‘Your big sister here get you straightened out?’

            ‘She ain’t my sister, but you got it about right.  She caught me.  I can’t pay for them, and I did get three rides here yesterday, so that’ll have to be enough until I can get more money.’

            The man looked around them and back along the growing line of customers.  He leaned forward.  ‘Tell you what, kid.  You see that concessions stand over there sellin’ drinks?  If you would go over there and fetch me a cup of coffee, I’ll let you take a ride.’  He slid a five-dollar bill through the window with two tickets.  He winked at Jackie and smiled.  Then he looked back at the boy.  ‘And you bring me the change, okay?’  Jamie’s face broke into a big grin, the first one Jackie had seen.  He looked more like the little boy he was.  He nodded, grabbed the bill with the tickets, and trotted off to fulfill the errand.  After delivering the coffee and change, he reached into his pocket for the pair of tickets and gave one to her, striding toward the ticket-taker in high anticipation.

            Jackie had ridden the Wild Mouse a few times before, and she remembered it as thrilling and scarry.  But she had never ridden it with an eight-year-old boy who, despite his repeats, went wild.  This kid she had come to know as a vulgar and feisty thief, then as a defeated insular ingrate, and then as a curious child with many questions about animals, 4-H, and ranching, had transformed into a wailing cyclone of writhing ecstasy.  The short little car came up to ninety-degree turns at full speed, then zipped around them like a demonic mouse with a cat on its tail.  Jamie screamed through them continuously at the top of his lungs.  When it was over her ears were ringing, and her first steps were unsure from the dizzy feeling in her head.  But Jamie danced and skipped his way out in delirious joy through the gate in the surrounding fence.  He would have skipped right back in line for another ride, had that been an option.

            Jamie,’ came a voice from an obnoxious looking boy. In a maroon hoodie, a pair of earbuds around his neck vibrated visibly as they thumped out a steady drum beat.  His expression was rude, though he had a face that could pass for ruggedly handsome, framed by greasy dark hair.   He stood only an inch taller than Jackie.  ‘Where the hell have you been all night?  You were s’posed to stick behind me an’ Amos yesterday.’

            ‘I tried.  But when you guys went into that cabaret side show they wouldn’t let me in.  So I went back to the Wild Mouse.  You shoulda looked for me.’

            ‘Well, Shitface––ya coulda just waited for us.’  He looked at Jackie.  ‘So who are you?’  His eyes drifted down and up again, taking in her form.

            ‘Jackie.  I found your little brother hiding here in the night, upset and hungry.  I took him to the horse barn where I’m staying with my 4-H animal, and I got out something for him to eat and a place to sleep. 

            ‘So what the hell were you doing here in the night?’  A creepy smile slowly curled his lips.

‘Taking a walk after I slept a while.  My animal woke me up just after midnight.’  AND, I was taking care of a lost boy who was supposed to be your responsibility, right?’

            ‘I ain’t gettin’ paid to babysit.  The little dork took off when he was s’posed to wait.  What can I say?’  He looked her over again.  ‘Looks to me like he did okay––found himself a sweetie big sister to board him––even if she’s a hot cowgirl with a sassy attitude.’  His face traded into to a creepy grin.

            Jackie pushed her hat back from her brow a little and sighed.  She turned to kid brother.  ‘Jamie, you have your uncle’s phone number, don’t you?’  The boy looked at her and nodded.  ‘Let’s go back to Shimmer.   Seems like she’ll be happier to see you than your brother is.  She’ll even let you ride her around some.  Then you can help me get her ready to load up...and we’ll get some lunch too.  We’ll call your uncle when my dad comes to pick up me and Shimmer, and then we can drop you off at his bar and grill.’

            Jamie looked at his brother and considered for a moment.  Then he reached up to take Jackie’s hand and the two started off toward the livestock barns.  ‘Could you show me how I can join a 4-H club before we leave?  By the way, what do the four H’s stand for again?’

            Jackie stopped.  She turned back to glare at the feckless brother.  ‘Sure Jamie, and that would be Head, Heart, Hands, and Health,’ she said.  And they walked away.

 

Bio:

Darrell Wiens is Professor Emeritus of Biology in Iowa, now living in Kansas City. He creates stories involving believable characters facing various issues. An award-winning teacher and mentor, he is author of 27 scientific papers and 53 presentations with students from his laboratory. He has eleven published short stories.


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