Thursday, 12 March 2026

Alive at The Wrong Time by Jane Spirit, a tankard of medieval ale

 Martin had been interested in ancient places for as long as he could remember. Like many other children he had always been fascinated by history, but for him it had been more much than that. No matter whether he went to visit the ruins of medieval abbeys, or castles, or archaeological sites consisting of a flat field with a few interpretive boards, his sense of connection to the pasts lived out there was a tangible one. His parents thought it was a little odd when he became so caught up in what they thought of as daydreaming about the past. They did not understand it when Martin found himself transfixed; subsumed into a previous version of wherever he happened to be before finding himself just as suddenly back in his humdrum ‘real’ modern life as rather dull Martin.

Now, looking up at the remaining walls and towers, Martin remembered the last time he’d come to visit this castle. He’d been eleven then and on a residential school activity trip with his class to mark the end of their primary school years. He still recalled it clearly.

The other kids had trailed after their guide as they made their way upwards, mostly looking around them distractedly whilst a few worked hard to complete the activity sheets they’d been handed on clipboards which had little stubby pencils attached to them by string. Martin had found himself mesmerised in the small chamber room on the upper floor of the main castle. The guide had been describing how the King would have retired for the night into the distant corner of what seemed now to be an inhospitable bare flint and stone room but would then have been hung with lavish curtains and warmed from the chimney of the fire in the great chamber below. Then just outside the hangings, the guide had explained, two soldiers would have been stationed to guard the king against an attack.

Without warning, Martin found himself looking not at the guide, but towards the room entrance with his back to the wall curtains and peering into a gloom momentarily relieved by the guttering flame of a low burning candle placed in a niche of the wall. He felt himself to be heavy with fatigue but also filled with dread and anxiety to the point where he was rigid with anticipation. His arm ached with the effort of holding his sword prone in front of him, using two hands, as he recalled the methodically smoothing the sword’s surface when he had burnished it earlier. Next, he was suddenly aware of steps coming upwards towards him, of feet being placed ever so lightly onto the top step of the staircase. And then came the moment when he made out a silhouetted figure at the top of the stairs and when a sword tip had glinted as the figure bore down on him swiftly. Instinctively, Martin raised his sword arm upwards aiming to swipe downwards onto the enemy arm as it extended. He could see it all as if in slow motion and sensed his own chest contracting with a deep breath in preparation for the Herculean effort of saving his sovereign. Then came a momentary judder, as if an old news reel had stuttered in its movement. After that, in place of his assailant Martin could see only the jacketed tour guide who was gesturing to him to hurry along and keep up with the others, as they were moving on.

Thinking about it now of course Martin could understand why his parents had thought that he was simply prone to make believe when he had told them later how he had been for a few moments a guard in a fourteenth century castle. They had been certain that he would grow out of it in time… only he hadn’t done. If anything, the feelings that had gripped him on that school visit had become more certain and troubling. The time shifts happened unpredictably even in apparently modern places which, it turned out, had been built on much older sites. He had given up trying to explain to his parents that he was not just daydreaming about the past but becoming a part of it for a while.

During his teens mum and dad had encouraged him to join a medieval re-enactment group, but he had only felt faintly ridiculous in his mock mesh soldier’s chain mail and tabard. As childhood passed, he had accepted that life in the modern world could be pleasant enough. He knew by then that he belonged in an earlier epoch, but it troubled him less. He wondered nonetheless whether there were other people who felt as he did. Presumably, like him, it was something that they would not dare to talk about once they grew up.

And today he was here again at the castle, but this time with his new girlfriend, Yolanda, who had hung back briefly to make a quick call by the entrance booth where the signal was better. As they ambled their way closer to the castle, Martin casually swung his free arm a little whilst holding on to Yolanda’s hand lightly with the other. This was early days, he told himself, and he didn’t want to come across as too needy or too possessive of her. They had met at work and through chatting about weekend plans had discovered and gently investigated each other’s love of historical places. And now here they were on a long day trip to visit the castle he had somehow found himself enthusiastically describing to her.

As they crossed through the portcullis space into the castle remains, Yolanda turned to smile at him. ‘There’s so much of it left,’ she said and squeezed his hand with an almost childish excitement. Martin felt an unaccustomed surge of happiness and began to lead her carefully towards the smaller tower’s narrow spiral staircase. They climbed together in near darkness ready to emerge on top of a narrow section of the flint curtain wall where they would be able to walk along as far as the next tower. Martin paused close to the slight widening at the top of the staircase to let Yolanda through so that she would be the first to step on to the walkway and see the view across the fields towards the nearby town and beyond to the hazy outline of the hills. He wanted to hear her exclaim about the wonder of it all. For once he was not thinking about his own past or about the past world in which the castle had been painstakingly constructed to shelter and protect some ancient noble. He was conscious only of the colder feel of the wind on his face after the rather dank air of the staircase and of the way the breeze had caught Yolanda’s hair making it fly across her face.

 When she moved past him Yolanda seemed suddenly to stumble. He thought afterwards that she must have caught her foot on the worn stone of the deep final step in her eagerness to reach the walkway and the view. Instantly he extended his arm out towards her and caught her, steadying her upright as she swayed. They were both smiling when they stood hand in hand looking out on the view.

 ‘Thank you, Martin, you saved me there,’ she laughed.

Martin laughed too with the exhilaration of the moment. He thought that later he would dare to tell Yolanda about his childhood visit to the castle and the years of unease it had led to. For now, he wanted her to enjoy her encounter with that long ago world. He would be content to keep her safe from any peril in the present one.


Bio:

Jane lives in Woodbridge, Suffolk UK. With the encouragement of the local creative writing class which she joined in 2021 she has been writing stories ever since, some of which have appeared on CaféLit.

 
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