The Windrush meandered under several small stone bridges in the centre of Bourton-on-the-Water. Hotels and restaurants built of golden Cotswold stone stood proudly near the river's edge. The areas rich history dated back to Neolithic times, with evidence of habitation from that period up to the Roman era, when Icknield Street connected Bourton to Templeborough in South Yorkshire. During the Middle Ages it had become sheep territory known for its production of wool. Now, in the summer months, it was swamped with tourists from all over the world snapping away with their digital cameras and mobile phones, each trying to capture the charm of Olde Worlde England that the Tourist Board had carefully crafted for them.
Ducks trod water or
clustered along each bank of the river accosting visitors for food, the emerald
sheen of a mallard or the bright red bill of a moorhen standing out amid the
rest.
This had been their
favourite place. Near enough to Cheltenham to make day trips in summer and
winter possible. Now along with memories there was a sense of melancholy.
Although the model village and the motor museum remained, nothing seemed quite
right. Something was missing. Even the Edinburgh Mill shop, a favourite haunt,
lacked its usual charm. It took him awhile to realise that what was missing was
not in the town but in himself.
The Riverside Cafe was relatively quiet. A few out-of-season
tourists sat on high backed wooden chairs in front of square, polished tables
laden with the remnants of all day breakfasts. Plastic replicas of yellow
lilies stood erect in tall, glass vases amid the plates and condiments. Red
mural tapestries, picked out by carefully positioned spotlights, hung from the
white walls and added a splash of colour to the dining area, creating an
overall impression that was clean, minimal and modern.
A young couple,
holding hands and staring into each other’s eyes, occupied the table they
normally sat at. He ordered a toasted teacake and a latte. He sat nibbling at
its edges rather than eating.
Later that evening the winter sun cast golden reflections
across the Windrush and made the light frost on the pavements shine like
myriads of diamonds. The trees stood stark and bare against the skyline.
Before leaving
home he had poured the ashes from the urn into an orange Sainsbury's bag to
make them look less conspicuous. The ducks had already gone to sleep with their
heads tucked under their wings as he slowly let handfuls of ash scatter onto
the quietly moving water. Soon she would be travelling through the
Gloucestershire countryside she loved so much.
On the other side
of the river an elderly couple stopped for a moment and glanced at the stooping
grey haired man, apparently still feeding the ducks, before moving on.
Slowly he made
his way to his car, depositing the empty bag in a bin. Ahead lay the short
journey to the empty house.
A wonderful short story about the loneliness of love lost and the difficulty of dealing with life after losing someone special. Sadly, something we will all experience. Beautifully expressed
ReplyDeleteThanks. Muxh appreciated.
DeleteAbsolutely love this. This story gives such a sense of place. Such a poignant piece. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks. I love Bourton-on-the-Water.
DeleteA lovely atmosphere created by the vivid descriptions. Beautiful unsentimental melancholic ending
ReplyDeleteThank you. I tried to remain authentic and to avoid sentimentality.
DeleteThis is a lovely read Mike. It is very well observed and described. You leave the thought of lost authenticity hanging behind every scene like old cobwebs wafting in the breeze of time. The scattering of ashes masquerading as feeding ducks takes it to a satisfying exit point. Jim
ReplyDeleteThanks Jim.
DeleteBeautifully written! Vivid description !
ReplyDeleteThank you. Very much appreciated,
DeleteBeautiful evocative piece
ReplyDeleteIt’s beautiful , so descriptive, I felt I was there .
ReplyDeleteThis feels incredibly real. Thank you for sharing.
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